The month of April delivers muddy boots and knees that
can predict the weather.
Pain leaves us with memories rewriting sunny days into an
American Horror Story.
A book takes me away from dirty dishes that remind me
dinner could have used a better cook.
These are so clever! I find these surprisingly hard to do well, but you've nailed it.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great trio! A snippet of Americano. I especially feel the first and last.
ReplyDeleteYour brevity is brilliant Susie! Love these and the new look of this blog.
ReplyDeleteThese are really so hard to do... love the last one especially. Do you think the 17 syllable count (or not) matters? Most modern haiku seem to have done away with it, in any case.
ReplyDeleteI changed my title. I didn't stay true to the American Sentence Form. Thank you for pointing it out.
DeleteI agree with Rajani, this sentence form is hard to do. But yours read like an effortless compilation. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI really love the way this trio works separately and as a unit. Thoughts brew into a story--each ingredient holding on to its own taste, and creating something new as a collective.
ReplyDeleteThe middle sentence left me sighing...
These are absolutely gorgeous, Susie!💝 I love the power in the brevity of your verse!
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