Saturday, March 6, 2021

Moon on Ebony and Ivory

 


We danced to the end of the world on piano keys warmed by the moon.

©Susie Clevenger 2021

American Sentence: Seventeen syllables

The Sunday Muse #150 

 


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14 comments:

  1. Carrie Van HornMarch 6, 2021 at 9:45 AM

    Oh how I love this poetic dance Susie!! An amazing American Sentence!!

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  2. indybevMarch 6, 2021 at 10:29 AM

    What an eloquent American sentence. It fits the image so well!

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  3. C. SandlinMarch 6, 2021 at 11:00 AM

    This chill but luminous sense of ending is entrancing.

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  4. FireblossomMarch 6, 2021 at 1:09 PM

    I'm hearing "Sway" playing in the background. Sweet American Sentence, Susie!

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  5. ✿March 6, 2021 at 4:44 PM

    This could go different ways, but I like imagining the romantic story only hinted at by the words. I feel tenderness rising up—young, innocent love ... or old! And gosh, just a little taste of something can go such a long way. I love this.

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  6. ZanderMarch 6, 2021 at 5:35 PM

    Might I suggest a theme song to go with your micro: Dance Me To the End of Love, Leonard Cohen. Nice job!

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  7. kaykualaMarch 6, 2021 at 5:53 PM

    Perfectly done Susie, short and sweet they would say!

    Hank

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  8. biko kenyanitoMarch 6, 2021 at 6:38 PM

    Youthful, enticing and wild.

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  9. JimMarch 6, 2021 at 9:47 PM

    'Fore the moon grew dark the sun didn't shine and we fell from Earth's sharp edge
    Great seventeen, Susie
    ..

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  10. TruedessaMarch 7, 2021 at 8:16 AM

    Well done and fits the image! My mind wants to go in different directions as I ponder your words.

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  11. qbitMarch 7, 2021 at 12:59 PM

    Music with seventeen notes in the scale...

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  12. ms_liliMarch 7, 2021 at 1:39 PM

    Imagining the dance under the warm moonlight.
    Li @tao-talk

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  13. HelenMarch 7, 2021 at 8:54 PM

    A magical American Sentence .. and fits the photography perfectly!

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  14. purplepeninportland.comMarch 12, 2021 at 5:31 PM

    Lovely!

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